I think it would be good for you if you put in your description what your thought process was when you were creating this song. It would help me give better feedback and a more accurate rating and I wouldn't have to rely on my own taste, but rather how well I thought your concept came across.
For example, I don't see how the title correlates with the music itself. I suggest elaborating why you chose that title.
As far as my own taste goes, I'm not crazy about it, particularly the vocal pitch-shifting. I've heard many songs with that exact effect and have never been crazy about it. I wish I could provide feedback that is more useful, but right now I can't.
I hope you find this review to be a little bit useful at least. :)
More info about how I review music here: https://codefreq.newgrounds.com/news/post/1089806