It does seem stream-of-conciousness oriented.
That said, there is a moment from the 19 second up until the 38 second mark where it feels like either found footage horror or, more so IMO, it evokes the similar unsettling feeling I got when I watched Petscop for the first time. This moment has potential. I'd like to see you run with that concept in a future piece.
I don't get why you think the piece is funny. I'm open to hearing why.
I'm curious about the title. Why is it called "Vibe Check"?
I also think you could use compression/limiting or at least normalization to increase the volume. That way the listener doesn't have to change the volume for this specific piece.
I hope you find my feedback useful. :)
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