First, I suggest you put in your description your thought process going into creating and releasing this song. It will help me give a rating and review based on how clearly your intent came across rather than my personal preference.
For example, one element I'm wondering about is the title. Out of curiosity, why did you name it that?
That said, I like this piece. I'd like to see this grow into a full-fledged song, even it remains instrumental.
More info about how I review music here: https://codefreq.newgrounds.com/news/post/1089806